Is this a good beginning to my story?

wow. through out the whole time i was reading it, i thought you were an adult. but when i saw that you were thirteen, i was shocked. very very good, even for someone older. the only thing i would change is the plot. the woman shouldn't be in love with the ghost. the ghost should be younger. at first it should annoy cora, but after a while, she should start to enjoy his company, and the ghost should bring out something in her that others realize. And they become friends. Personally, it wouldn't be as good if they fell in love. that's so.......predictable. make the relationship different. But that is my opinion. If your heart is set on them falling in love, then go ahead